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Sunday, July 16, 2006
Sand -- A Fantasy Serial (Part V)

Chapter Five
Aftermath

(Welcome to the final chapter of Sand. Radric has vanquished his long-time enemy, the wizard Caswell, in a heated battle in the middle of the B’Kar Waste. DaRK PaRTY is pleased to publish the last installment of this adventure fantasy. Sand was originally published in Lost Worlds: The Writers and Artists’ Science Fiction and Fantasy Forum.)

“You killed him,” Quil said.

The Demimondaine bled from where he had struck her on the bottom lip. She stood over the dead wizard; tears flowing from her beautiful eyes. Radric, his flesh scorched from the lightning and fire, found safety in the shade of the outcropping. He bandaged the wound where Quil slashed him her dagger.

Caswell’s ring in his possession was already in Radric's pocket. The Lady Fflame would be pleased and he’d collect his gold.

“You’re free to go,” Radric told Quil.

She shook her head. “First, I’m going to kill you.”

He smirked. “No, I’m not going to die today. And neither are you.”

Radric tightened the bandage and stood. After wiping the blood from his blade, he slid it back into the scabbard. He stared at her and she turned away. He mounted his horse and took a long pull from his water skin before tossing at her feet.

“I’m heading to the Black Hills,” he said. “There’s water there and a Dwarfen mining village. You’re welcome to follow.”

“Murderer,” she said and spit in the sand.

He nodded. “The murderer is dead.”

He spurred his horse forward. If the Demimondaine wanted to die in the desert that was her business. He rode through the sand, the setting sun glittering off the mica, a thousand blazing stars. He tried not to think about the dead wizard or the Gypsy girl.

Behind him he heard the Demimondaine mount her horse and follow. She didn’t want to die after all. He wondered if and when she’d try to kill him and decided that it really didn’t matter any more.

THE END


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Sunday, July 09, 2006
Sand -- A Fantasy Serial (Part IV)

Chapter Four
Death in the Desert

(Welcome to the fourth chapter of Sand. We join Radric in the aftermath of his rescue of his sworn enemy, Caswell, and the half-elf woman, Quil, as they try to escape from the arid, barren landscape of the B’Kar Waste. Each week DaRK PaRTY is pleased to publish another chapter in this exciting tale of swords and sorcery. Sand was originally published in Lost Worlds: The Writers and Artists’ Science Fiction and Fantasy Forum.)

“I’m hungry,” Quil said.

The mid-afternoon was sweltering. The sun, high above the B’Kar Waste, baked their bodies and turned the sand into a furnace. They plodded south, away from the D’jaren war party and Lindell. Radric had hoped to reach the Black Hills by nightfall, but he now realized that Quil and Caswell were too weak. The wizard sagged in his saddle, bleary and limp. They would have to spend another night in the desert.

Radric reined his horse and headed for a mammoth slab of sandstone jutted out of the desert like a broken finger. The outcropping provided shade; relief from the relentless and unmerciful sun. The heat was so overpowering, Radric almost wished he were wearing the midnight cloak – a dangerous proposition. His throat was dry, but he resisted the urge to drink. Their water supply was dangerously low.

He let Quil arrange his saddlebag as a pillow for the wizard before helping his dismount. She laid him in the deepest part of the shade. The wizard mumbled his thanks and promptly lapsed into a deep, troubled sleep. Radric was thankful he couldn’t see the wizard’s dreams.

As the Demimondaine dabbed Caswell’s forehead with the end of her robe, Radric studied her features. She was an exquisite beauty. Her movements were smooth and fluid. She was slight and slender; her features soft and gentle from her elfin heritage. Her golden hair was lush, like a satin tapestry cascading down her shoulders. Her eyes were large, ovals and a striking sea green; like an emerald sparkling in torch light.

“Are you his slave?” Radric asked her.

She turned and glared coldly at him. “I’m so much more.”

He smirked. “Loyal to the end.”

Quil stood, wiping the sweat from her face with the back of her hand. “End of what, warrior?”

He frowned, but didn’t answer. Sloppy. Why hadn’t he killed Caswell yet? It was foolish to let the wizard regain his strength. He had witnessed a weakened Caswell encase four D’jaren guards into ice pillars. Rested and healthy, Caswell would be too powerful to defeat with a sword. Yet for some unknown reason, he couldn’t muster the will to cut the man’s throat. He shook his head in disgust. Caswell deserved to die – the wizard had betrayed him, murdered the gypsy girl and the dwarf. He should be savoring this moment.

Radric removed his armor and dropped his sword next to him. He propped himself against the rock and bit into a dried piece of rabbit meat. Quil approached and she saw him studying the scars on his chest and shoulders.

“Who are you?” she asked. “At first, I thought you might be one of the Dark Tarkkum soldiers sent to save us. But you’re not. You’re something else.”

“Radric,” Caswell said.

They both turned toward the wizard. Caswell had managed to sit up and was drinking from a water skin.

“That’s his name,” Caswell said to the Demimondaine. “Once upon a time he was a Defender. One of the realm’s elite swordsmen. I don’t know why he left – he never told me. Too much gore, perhaps? A scandal? I guess it really doesn’t matter. By the time, I met him in Vitoria he was a drunk and a thief.”

“What does he want?” Quil asked.

“Revenge,” Caswell said. “But once a Defender, always a Defender. He can’t do it.”

She looked back at Radric. “But why?” she asked.

“He has a conscience.”

Radric stood. “You killed Ttara.”

Caswell smiled. “Ah, yes, the gypsy girl you bedded. Yes, I suppose I did. I should have killed you.”

“You tried.”

Quil was astonished. “He’s an assassin?”

“Aren’t they all, my love?” The wizard climbed to his feet, leaning against the rock. “I’m going to finish what I left undone in Vitoria. Good-bye Radric and thank you. I was tiring of D’jaren company.”

The wizard raised his hands and a blast of lightning snapped from his fingertips and entangled Radric in its electric web. The force of the magic lifted Radric into the air; he bounced off the side of the rock, tumbled through the air and landed twenty feet away in a pile of hot sand. The smell of his burnt flesh pierced his nostrils.

He staggered to his feet, spitting sand from his mouth. Quil charged him, slashing with a dagger. He tried to move, but the blade slashed his chest, blood splashing onto the sand. He almost fell and that would have been the end of him. Quil threw the dagger to her other hand the lunged again. This time he pivoted and hit her across the face with his forearm. She sprawled to the ground with cry.

Radric broke into a run, grabbed his sword, and charged Caswell. The wizard was still dazed from using his magic, but he lifted his arms and muttered a spell. A funnel of fire screeched through the air. Radric roared in frustration and pain. He launched himself just as the flames consumed him.

He crashed into the wizard, barreling him over, smashing against the rock. He rolled to his feet, yanking out his dagger, whirling around. Radric’s sword protruded from Caswell’s chest, buried up to the hilt in flesh.

“No,” the wizard said. “Not possible…”

Caswell, his expression filled with bewilderment, fire still sputtering from his fingertips, rolled over and died.

(Next week the final installment of Sand! Chapter Five: Aftermath!)


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Monday, July 03, 2006
Sand: A Fantasy Serial (Part III)

Chapter Three
Rescue

(Welcome to the third chapter of Sand. We join the warrior, Radric, as he attempts to rescue his sworn enemy, Caswell, from the clutches of a D’jaren war party. Each week DaRK PaRTY is pleased to publish another chapter in this exciting tale of swords and sorcery. Sand was originally published in Lost Worlds: The Writers and Artists’ Science Fiction and Fantasy Forum)

The four D’jaren guards felt safe so close to home. They had gathered next to a low rise to toss bone dice for coins. They were oblivious as Radric, clad in the icy embrace of the midnight cloak, lurked among their camels and stolen ponies. He cut the cords that bound them.

From the rope corral, he crept to the large tent at the center of the encampment. Strange music and muffled voices drifted from within. Carefully, Radric parted the tent flap and slipped inside. Once inside, he froze, letting the midnight cloak conceal his presence.

Torches lit the interior, bright, orange, and smoky. A pair of D’jaren played a flute-like instrument and a drum. The drummer hummed gently, his voice eerie, but mellifluous. A third D’jaren, who could only be the warchief, and a slight, but beautiful human woman were seated in front the musicians behind a large table laden with desert fruits, breads, roasted rabbit and lizard. The D’jaren chieftain smiled, tapping his feet to the music.

The woman was nude; freshly scrubbed, her long, golden hair cascading down her shoulders. A terrified expression wormed across her face. When she turned, Radric caught sight of her pointed ears. She was half-elf. A Demimondaine. He had heard stories about slavers who bred humans and elves for the female offspring. These half-breeds were supposed to be extremely beautiful and in great demand in many part of the world. This woman certainly fit those descriptions.

A groan from across the room interrupted Radric’s thoughts. At the far end of the tent was Caswell. The wizard was stripped naked and bound to a wooden pole. Caswell had been horribly beaten. Welts, bruises, and cuts covered his skinny body.

“Enough,” the warchief bellowed and the music ceased. “Leave us.”

The pair of musicians bowed and passed closely by Radric as they exited the tent. The chieftain lifted a fork with a slab of overcooked rabbit dangling from it.

“Are you sure you won’t eat?” he asked the Demimondaine. “You must be famished.”

She shook her head, but eyed the food greedily.

“Caswell!” the chieftain shouted. “Your woman is very beautiful. You have exquisite taste.”

Caswell tried to answer, but his words were garbled by the gag. The chieftain laughed.

“It’s unfortunate that we have to shut that gaping maw of yours, but you’re too dangerous without it. You’re a fool, wizard. Did you really think you could swindle the Salt Rock Clan of the mighty D’jaren nation? Did you think we’d ever sell our hunting grounds to Lindell? To humans? Now you will die in the B’Kar Waste like a sniveling cur.”

Caswell struggled against his shackles. Radric saw the sweat glistening on the wizard’s body.

“But such an added bonus,” the chieftain continued, smiling at the Demimondaine. “I didn’t realize you had a weakness for flesh.”

Radric now knew why the Lady Fflame wanted the wizard dead. She had been shunned in favor of the half-elf. And while, the Lady Fflame certainly possessed her own charms, she paled in comparison to the Demimondaine. The chieftain leaned over and caressed the half-elf’s cheek. She flinched.

Radric had seen enough.

He drew his sword. The sound was nearly silent, but the chieftain possessed D’jaren hearing and cocked his head. Recognizing the sound, the chieftain stood, hand dropping to his saber. Radric sprang, his movement disrupting the invisible magic of the midnight cloak, and shoved the chieftain back into his chair. Radric’s sword pressed against the chieftain’s throat.

“Move and die,” Radric hissed.

No one moved and Radric slipped into invisibility again. He wanted to kill the chieftain, but that would mean a blood feud with the D’jaren. He could ill afford that. Instead, he used the chieftain’s robes to bind his arms behind his back. Then, using the heavy hilt of his sword, he knocked the D’jaren unconscious.

“Who are you?” the Demimondaine whispered. Her silver eyes filled with hope. Radric pressed a finger to his lips. He strode to the other end of the tent and cut Caswell free.

“Thank you,” the wizard said, after yanking off his gag. “If you get me out of here, I promise you riches beyond your wildest dreams.”

“Can you use your sorcery?” Radric asked.

Caswell hesitated and then nodded. “I think so, but I’m weak.”

“Get dressed,” Radric said. “Find some robes for you and the woman.”

“Do I know you?” the wizard asked.

“Do it,” Radric said.

While Caswell and the Demimondaine collected robes from a chest by the table, Radric positioned himself at the side of the main entrance. Except for the occasional whinny from the horse corral, the camp was quiet. A few minutes, Caswell’s whispered voice filled the tent.

“Where are you?”

Radric, cloaked in invisibility, lifted his arm to disrupt the spell. “Here.”

As she spoke, a pair of D’jaren warriors emerged from the darkness and headed toward the chieftain’s tent. They were speaking in hushed tones to each other. One laughed out loud. Radric pulled back.

“Hide,” he said.

Caswell’s face paled, perhaps remembering the torture he’d received at the hands of the D’jaren. There was no telling what they’d do to them after an escape attempt. Despite his fears, the wizard grabbed the woman by the wrist and they ducked under the table.

The two D’jaren warriors announced themselves and Radric attacked. His sword sliced neck of the first one, who gagged and toppled, clutching the bloody wound. The second warrior reacted quickly and spun out of reach, Radric’s blade cutting the hood of his cloak. The warrior pulled free his scimitar, immediately sniffing the air. Radric froze. The warrior continued to sniff, searching desperately for Radric’s scent. Using his invisibility to its fullest advantage, Radric twirled to his right, slashing at the D’jaren. The effect was very much like a sword appearing out of no where, striking and then vanishing in an instant. The D’jaren struck where he thought Radric was standing and when he was fully extended, Radric cut him down. The warrior fell next to his fallen comrade.

“Follow me,” Radric said.

He trotted to the corral followed closely by Caswell and the woman. They ran headlong into the four D’jaren guards. They charged with scimitars and spears, screaming savagely to alert the rest of the camp. Radric braced himself, but saw little hope of survival.

A frozen wind, colder than the embrace of the midnight cloak, rush passed him. The four warriors whitened as a sheet of ice encased their bodies. They froze like marble statues in the temples of Vixonia. Radric turned in time to see the wizard collapse in exhaustion; his hands still glowing white from the magic that had shot from his fingertips.

“What’s your name?” Radric asked the woman.

“Quil.”

“Find a horse, Quil.”

Radric lifted the mage to his shoulder and followed the woman into the corral. She mounted the first horse she came to and he took the next, draping Caswell in front of him. Radric slapped the horse and shouted, sending the horses and camels into a frenzy of flight. Radric and Quil rode the stampede as angry shouts echoed in their ears. Arrows whizzed by their heads, but they were soon out of range.

They stopped briefing to retrieve Radric’s warhorse and then galloped quickly into the desert night.

(Next week: Chapter Four: Death in the Desert!)

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Sunday, June 25, 2006
Sand: A Fantasy Serial (Part II)

Chapter Two
Discovery in the B’Kar Waste

(Welcome to the second installment of our five-part swords and sorcery adventure. We join our hero, Radric, shortly after he discovered an ambush in the hot, arid desert of the B’Kar Waste. Each week DaRK PaRTY will publish another chapter in this pulse-pounding short story. A version of Sand was originally published in Lost Worlds: The Writers and Artists’ Science Fiction and Fantasy Forum.)

Two days later, Radric spotted a whiff of smoke twirling lazily across the sharp blue desert sky. He hobbled his mount and crawled to the top of the next dune. The sand had become more course and he knew that in a few days the D’jaren war party he was tracking would arrive at the western steppes of the B’Kar Waste.

Their homeland.

The dune proved to be an excellent vantage point. The D’jaren party was camped a low steppe next to a desert stream, a thin trickle of dun-colored water that reminded Radric he was thirsty.

The D’jaren camels and the horses stolen from the dead soldiers were tied in a makeshift corral made of rope. Radric counted seven tents, including the large one at the center belonging to the D’jaren warchief.

Radric settled to wait.

The afternoon faded into twilight and the aroma of cooking wafted over Radric’s outpost. D’jaren were fond of sand lizards and the root of thistle cactus, which they ground into a thick paste. Two D’jaren warriors guarded the mounts and two others patrolled the perimeter of the camp. Radric leaned back against the sand and tried to remember everything he could about the D’jaren.

It was rare to meet a D’jaren outside their homeland and, in fact, Radric never had. His two encounters with them had been in battle in the B’Kar Waste when he had been a sell sword. He knew little of their culture. They were nomads and tribal. He knew of six or seven clans with names like Stone Lizard and Thunder Rock. The clans constantly feuded over territory.

The race was distantly related to humans, but smaller in stature. Their skin was pale yellow and hairless, thick and contoured like tree bark. D’jaren wore layers of brown, yellow, and white robes and Radric had heard that the colors signified status within the clan. Their most startling feature, at least to humans, was a flap of gelatinous skin that protruded from their foreheads and covered their faces – extending to their upper lips. This flap, known as a d’jar, was a great source of pride and often tattooed and decorated with gold and silver jewelry.

The d’jars main purpose was to shield the D’jaren’s eyes from the harsh wind storms of the B’Kar Waste. D’jaren eyes, said to be star-shaped vermilion-colored orbs about the size of raisins, were considered holy. It was forbidden for D’jaren to reveal their eyes in public; rare even in private. It was a sign of great honor and respect for a D’jaren to show his eyes to another.

The D’jaren did not “see” like humans. Somehow they were able to distinguish shadows and light, but relied more on hearing and scent. D’jaren saw the heat energy emitted by living creatures. Against the stark, lifeless background of the B’Kar Waste, living things glowed, allowing the D’jaren to see them. It was said that in a jungle, a D’jaren would be completely blind.

After another quick survey of the camp, Radric returned to his horse to wait for full dark. The dry, desert heat cooled as night approached. Radric crouched in the sand and ate a dinner of dried rabbit, hard cheese, and brown bread. His water supply was running dangerous low, so he took only a few conservative sips from his water skin.

As the first and second moons rose, Radric plotted his rescue of the wizard. The D’jaren party looked settled, which meant they were probably at a planned rendezvous site to wait for the rest of the clan. Once that happened there would be little chance of a rescue. Radric adjusted his saddle bags against his back and pondered.

Many years ago, he and Caswell had been traveling companions, if not friends. All that changed in Vixoria, the City of Saints, in the far east beyond the Churning Sea. There they met the Gypsy girl, Ttara, and the Mountain Dwarf, Shattock. Shattock knew of an out of the way warehouse that belonged to the High Temple of Vixoria. There were rumors of a forgotten sub-basement that stored old relics – golden goblets, jewel-studded scepters, ivory statues, and other exotic treasures. Shattock’s eyes glimmered as he regaled them with his tale. It had been a simple plan, one that relied on Radric’s warrior skills and Caswell’s magic. Greed must have consumed Caswell. It was the only explanation for what happened next.

In the end, Ttara and Shattock lay dead in the dust of the basement and the wizard fled with the booty. Radric survived the betrayal, crawling to Ttara’s side, shortly before she died, holding her cold hand as she wept into death. He had been captured by the High Temple Guard and spent two long years in a Vixorian labor camp, cutting stone and sifting through tons of sand. He picked up a handful of sand and let in run between his fingers. He had broken his vow never to touch sand again.

Radric escaped from the labor camp. He spent a long time searching for Caswell, but the wizard had disappeared and as the year wore on, Radric lost hope of ever finding him. He wandered, mostly in the south along the coast of the Great Sterling Ocean. The cities there were populous and wealthy. He gambled and drank; hiring out as a bodyguard or a sell sword – whoever would pay him the most coin. Then two months ago, he met the Lady Fflame of Lindell, a powerful kingdom in the west.

She was a woman scorned. Scorned by Caswell. The wizard had gained in stature since his days thieving in Vixoria. He was now a trusted advisor and comrade to the king of Lindell. Caswell ruled a portion of the kingdom known as Tarkkum. He lived in an elegant stronghold and commanded the Dark Tarkkum Guard, an elite corps of the Lindellian Army.

Radric touched the purse of gold coins Lady Fflame had given to him. She promised him more – much more, if he’d kill Caswell and bring her the wizard’s ring. Fflame knew nothing of the bitter hatred Radric felt for Caswell. She thought he was simply a paid assassin that she had met in a dark tavern. A mercenary. It had been a chance meeting. The chance of a lifetime. Radric had tracked the wizard to his stronghold in Tarkkum only to discover that Caswell had left for a junket to the B’Kar Waste to settle a border dispute with the D’jaren. A junket that had obviously met with failure.

From the folds of his saddlebags, Radric removed his prized possession – a midnight cloak. Even in the pitch blackness of the desert night, the cloak pulsed with blackness as deep as oil. The cloak was magic, sewn by Night Elves. Donning the cloak draped the wearer in invisibility. It wasn’t foolproof. To work, the wearer had to remain still, movement nullifying the magic’s effects. The cloak was also dangerous. It fed off the wearer’s soul. Wearing a midnight cloak too long was almost certain death. It wasn’t without hesitation that Radric donned the cloak over his armor and weapons.

Putting on the cloak felt very much like being dipped in ice water. He felt the familiar freezing of his blood and shuddered. Quickly and quietly, he scaled the dune and headed into the D’jaren camp. It was time.

(Stay tuned to next week's installment of Sand -- Chapter Three: Rescue)


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Monday, June 19, 2006
Sand: A Fantasy Serial (Part 1)

Chapter One
A Desert Massacre

(Welcome to our new special feature. Each week DaRK PaRTY will be publishing a chapter in a five-part swords and sorcery adventure called Sand. A version of this heart-pounding, action-packed short story was originally published in Lost Worlds: The Writers and Artists’ Science Fiction and Fantasy Forum.)

A shredded banner flapped in the desert wind. A heavy gust snapped the flag like a horse whip; the sound echoing across the flat plain. A golden sphere on a black background was the crest of the Dark Tarkkum Guard.
Radric had found his quarry.

Dead soldiers and their mounts surrounded an overturned carriage, its roof caved in. Fat, ruby-necked vultures picked at the remains of a warhorse, squabbling amongst themselves with squawks and pecks. One of the birds lifted its head and glared at Radric with tiny, black eyes.

Arrows riddled the bodies of the soldiers. The attackers had been swift and in a hurry; not bothering to retrieved their weapons. The arrows were crudely constructed, the shafts shaped from sun-bleached wood. D’jaren design. Desert dust coated everything and Radric knew that by nightfall the shifting sands of the B’Kar Waste would swallow the battleground.

Radric dismounted and tied his mount to a broken section of the carriage axle. He paused, cocked his head, and listened. The wind hissed across the sand, the banner rippled, and the vultures argued. Otherwise the dunes were silent. He walked to the nearest soldier and knelt down to investigate.

The soldier was a seasoned veteran. Scars and a shaggy, brown beard covered a weathered face. He was garbed in the tradition black armor and red sash of the Dark Tarkkum Guard. A pair of arrows protruded from between the links of his breastplate. His sword and dagger were still sheathed. The soldier had been killed instantly and judging from and looked to have been dead for only a few hours.



Radric stood and counted the bodies. Fourteen men. He walked to the perimeter and wasn’t surprised to find a series of shallow pits. A D’jaren ambush. An old trick. D’jaren warriors armed with bows would lay buried under the sand in a semi-circle. When the unsuspecting party moved into the center of the horseshoe, the warriors rose out to the sand and fired. Anyone not killed by the arrows would be cut down with scimitars. By the number of pits and arrows, Radric estimated the D’jaren party at 20. A war party.


The inside of the carriage had been stripped. Radric found a torn orange jacket under the seat that matched Caswell’s fashion taste. The mage was fond of colorful silks. There were no dead D’jaren, which meant that Caswell had not been able to cast a spell before being captured. The D’jaren were wary of necromancy and would have been quick to disable the wizard. That meant they knew Caswell was coming. The ambush hadn’t been a random attack, but a planned kidnapping. That complicated things.



A caught a glimpse of himself in a shattered fragment of mirror. His grizzled face was speckled with grayish whiskers, his long brown hair, streak with white, was tied in a ponytail with a piece of worn leather. He stared into his cold blue eyes, a sneer splaying across his face. Then he knocked the mirror over.

The sun hung low on the horizon. Radric dismissed a brief notion to camp inside the carriage. Better to sleep away from the carrion eaters and the ghosts of the fallen guards. He mounted his horse and rode over the dunes until he found a rock outcropping that would break the cold, night wind of the waste.

He had found Caswell. Now all he had to do was rescue him from the D’Jaren.

(Stayed tuned for next week's installment of Sand -- Chapter Two: Discovery in the B'Kar Waste)

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